Today I’m sharing an excerpt from a short story I’m writing. I last wrote something in October, but ever since then my protagonist, Angel, has been out of reach. I’m really hoping he’ll come back to me. In the meantime, I’d love to know what you think.
Oooo I loved that! Would definitely love to some how learn more about Mrs. Velasquez and her life via the protagonist. Memories of their conversations where she spoke of cuba or didnt or of her life in america- old lovers , or assumptions the the protagonist is making piecing things together between conversations with her and things she learns from the family in town.
Thank you so much for commenting - I SO appreciate it/you! I really like your ideas, especially about incorporating Mrs. Velasquez's life history & memories. I'm going to noodle on this and keep writing. Thanks again! xx
Oooo I loved that! Would definitely love to some how learn more about Mrs. Velasquez and her life via the protagonist. Memories of their conversations where she spoke of cuba or didnt or of her life in america- old lovers , or assumptions the the protagonist is making piecing things together between conversations with her and things she learns from the family in town.
Thank you so much for commenting - I SO appreciate it/you! I really like your ideas, especially about incorporating Mrs. Velasquez's life history & memories. I'm going to noodle on this and keep writing. Thanks again! xx